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Exercise 6 - Identifying and correcting errors in thesis statements



Instructions: Identify and fix the problem with each thesis statement in the following introductory paragraphs.

Should Marijuana Be Legalized?

      People believe they know the difference between illegal and legal drugs. The popular belief is that illegal drugs cause severe health problems and induce criminal behavior, whereas legal drugs do not pose serious problems to the user and to society. But is this always true? Many popular legal drugs, if they are taken in toxic doses, can cause serious health problems, even death. On the other hand, certain illegal drugs—such as marijuana—do not cause such serious problems and have significant therapeutic benefits. Yet, marijuana still remains illegal. So, perhaps the assumption that all legal drugs are good and all illegal drugs are bad is incorrect since the decision to categorize drugs as legal or illegal has been an arbitrary one. Marijuana is one substance that has been mistakenly classified as an illegal drug for too long. It is less harmful than such legal drugs as tobacco and alcohol, offers medicinal benefits, and its legalization would offer significant economic benefits to society. Therefore, legalizing marijuana may not be such a bad idea after all.

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