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Exercise 9 - Correcting bad concluding sentences in body paragraphs



Instructions: Read the paragraph and type an appropriate concluding sentence in the box.

      Voter registration is one of the obstacles a voter has to overcome in order to vote. An eligible voter cannot vote without first registering. This places an added burden on eligible voters because those who forgot or failed to register are unable to cast their votes. Studies have shown that voter turnout started to decline after registration was instituted. Interestingly, the U.S. is not the only democracy that has a registration requirement; other western countries also require voters to register. The difference is that in countries with higher voter turnout, registering voters is the responsibility of the government, whereas in the U.S. it is the individual's responsibility. Another obstacle to voter turnout in the U.S. is that the time and locations of registration are not well publicized, so many people do not know when and where to register. In addition, registration laws in the U.S. are established by state governments, and some states have laws that make it difficult for citizens to qualify because they have to prove eligibility by having lived at a certain location for a certain length of time, usually between 30 and 50 days. There is no doubt that low voter turnout will continue to be a problem in the U.S. for a long time.

hint     
Write your concluding sentence here
Done
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