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Exercise 2 - Adding details to a body paragraph



Instructions: The following paragraph has problems with missing details. The numbers inside the paragraph indicate the places where details are missing. Click on the EDIT PARAGRAPH button to add details in the box provided (where the numbers indicate) to create a more detailed paragraph. Click on the HINT button to get ideas for missing details.

     Denying terminally ill patients the right to die has negative financial consequences for the family of the patient as well as for society. Caring for terminally ill patients costs a lot of money. (1) Normally these costs are so enormous that insurance coverage and family finances alone cannot handle them. (2) Instead of spending billions of dollars to keep terminally ill people alive and suffering needlessly, the government should deal with other urgent healthcare issues. (3) Since terminally ill patients suffer needlessly and family and society have to bear a tremendous financial burden in caring for them, there is no reason to deny these patients the right to die.
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