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Introduction to Exercise 2 - Revising an essay
What You Will Learn


In this exercise, you will learn how to revise your essay for clarity of content and organization of ideas.
What You Will Do

There are numbered blanks in the following outlines. When you click on the number, two choices will appear on the side. Click on the correct choice to insert it in the outline. If you click on the wrong choice, the Answer box at the bottom of the choices will tell you why your answer is wrong.
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