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Introduction to Exercise 7 - Writing cohesive
paragraphs
In this exercise, you will practice writing cohesive paragraphs (paragraphs
with sentences that flow smoothly).
Each of the following paragraphs has problems with cohesion. Click on the EDIT PARAGRAPH button
and make the necessary changes in the box provided to create a cohesive paragraph. Click on
the HINT button for a general explanation of how to achieve cohesion and for a description
of the cohesion problem in each paragraph. After typing your answer, click on the DONE button
to compare WHAT YOU WROTE with WHAT WE WROTE.
